After watching my powerpoint lesson on the above topic, write 6
complex sentences with interesting details in your adjective clauses.
There
are many expressions of quantity, so use a variety (some, all, none,
one, two, a few, many, not many, a bunch, several, etc.).
Remember:
For people: Whom or whose
For things: Which or whose
Example 1:
I
have many students this semester, one of whom speaks Vietnamese,
another of whom speaks Thai, two of whom come from Africa, a bunch of
whom come from Venezuela, and the majority of whom come from the Middle
East and speak Arabic.
Example 2:
I
have six kittens in my house, two of which are black and white, two of
which are striped tabbies, one of which is all black, and one of which
is grey and white.
Begin the sentences as follows:
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC,...
2. I know many interesting people,...
3. I love to do several different activities,...
4. I have had a few problems this semester,...
5. I like many types of food,...
6. I have (#) siblings (or friends or phones or something else),...
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC, one of whom has sense of humor, one of whom is so boring, one of whom play her IPad in class all the time, the rest of whom are not special.
ReplyDelete2. I know many interesting people, one of whom likes playing oil, one of whom like feed ants, a few of whom like business. Now they have a company which sells ants and teaches people how to feed ants.
3. I love to do several different activities, one of which is hiking, another of which is sky diving, the best of which is skiing.
4. I have had a few problems this semester, one of which is doing reaserch paper, another of which is absence, the last of which is homework. ( it seems like everything is a problem..)
5. I like many types of food, one of which is Thai, one of which is Japanese, my favor of which is Taiwanese food. ( Taiwanese food is really good, only if you try will you know what I'm taking about. )
6. I have four nephews ,two of whom love me so much, but one of whom hates me so much, the other one of whom even doesn't know who I am.
1. one of whom played on her Ipad? (AFAAAAA!)
Delete2. one of whom likes to feed ants (do people need to be taught how to feed ants???)
5. Only if a student will cook it for me will I have the opportunity to try authentic Taiwanese food SHAY SHAY
You have written some very thoughtful sentences (as usual), nearly all of which contain the same mistake. Before the last "of whom" or "of which," you need to have "and."
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC, all of whom are very nice and friendly, one of whom is from Turkey, many of whom are from America, none of whom is from Vietnam, and several of whom have good sense of humor.
ReplyDelete2. I know many interesting people, many of whom are people that I met when I traveled, one of whom is my very good friend and she is travelling the world, several of them are very good at telling story, and none of whom have been done anything bad to me.
3. I love to do several different activities,one of which is swimming, another of which is rock climbing, and the best of which is travelling.
4. I have had a few problems this semester, the most important of which is having difficulties adapting to new studying environment, another of which is the homework, and the last of which is the research paper.
5. I like many types of food, most of which are Vietnamese food, another of which is Thai food, and the least favorite of which is Indian food.
6. I have 5 siblings, four of whom are married and had babies, two of whom are pharmacists, one of whom is accountant, the oldest of whom is living in my hometown with my parents, and the youngest of whom is at his last year at school.
2. several of whom
DeleteYou have written 6 wonderful sentences, all of which you should be proud of!
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC, three of whom are funny and one of whom is the most funniest teacher I have ever had.
ReplyDelete2. I know many interesting people, many of whom are in Saudi Arabia and several of whom are in the United States.
3. I love to do several different activities, one of which is playing soccer and another of which is watching movies.
4. I have had a few problems this semester,one of which is the homework and the last of which is the absence
5. I like many types of food, one of which is indian food, one of which is Mexican food, and the most favorite of which is arabic food.
6. I have 5 siblings, one of whom is here in the United States, and the rest of whom are in Saudi Arabia.
1. :D
DeleteYou have written 6 perfect sentences, none of which contain a mistake!
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC, one of whom sings very well, two of whom are great storytellers, but all of whom are inspiring teachers. I am very lucky to meet such those wonderful teachers at LCC.
ReplyDelete2. I know many interesting people, some of whom can play at least 2 musical instruments, one of whom is a beatboxer and one of whom is really into graffiti.
3. I love to do several different activities, one of which is jogging with my dog, another of which is gardening.
4. I have had a few problems this semester, one of which is sleep deprivation that causes me feel drowsy at class, another of which is consonant clusters pronunciation.
5. I like many types of food, most of which are specialities from my country, one of which is Chinese dim sum, another of which is Sushi.
6. I have three lovely dogs, one of which enjoys chewing my slippers as if he is chewing gum, another of which would love to take a nap in my bed, the smallest of which likes playing with balls in my kitchen.
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC, one of whom is strict and another of whom is lenient.
Delete2. I know many interesting people, many of whom are professional players and others of whom are my classmates.
3. I love to do several different activities, one of which is playing soccer and another of which is hanging out with friends
4. I have had a few problems this semester, one of which is writing my research paper and the other of which is being accustomed to doing the homework on the blog
5. I like many types of food, one of which is Shawarma , another of which is Qima which is Persian food and another of which is Cheese burger.
6. I have 3 younger siblings, one of whom is a girl and she wants to call me everyday, another of whom is also a girl and she knows me but she feels shy when I talk to her on the phone and the other of whom is a little boy he knows my name but when he sees me on the phone he cries . He is scared of the phone I guess.
Nhi, you wrote many wonderful sentences, all of which I enjoyed reading, but most of which share the same mistake. Before the last "of which" or "of whom," you need to place "and."
DeleteHussain,
Delete5. Qima, which is Persian food (need the comma because its extra information!)
6. TRY AGAIN (3 mistakes)
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC, one of whom is single, three of whom are married teachers.
ReplyDelete2. I know many interesting people, two of whom love cooking, one of whom likes fishing, many of whom are interested in camping. Thus, we usually enjoy going camping outside together.
3. I love to do several different activities, one of which is walking meditation with my sister, another of which is going to the beach.
4. I have had a few problems this semester, one of which is that I have to drive a long way and it makes me so tired, another of which is that I haven't had enough time for well-finishing assignments due to my personal reasons recently.
5. I like many types of food, one of which is Vietnamese noodle, another of which is Japanese udon, and the rest of which is Italian pizza.
6. I have one sibling. She has a lot of hobbies, one of which is swimming, another of which is traveling, and the rest of which is reading book.
You wrote 6 sentences, four of which share the same mistake. Before the last "of which," you need "and."
DeleteNICE WORK.
Regarding #4, I hope that everything is okay with you.
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC, all of whom are very helpful and friendly, one of whom is from Canada, many of whom are from America, none of whom is from Pakistan, and my favorite teacher is Barbara who taught me at level 2.
ReplyDelete2. I know many interesting people, many of whom are people that I met when I studied at the LCC, one of whom is my best friend and she comes from Iraq, several of them are very friendly.
3. I love to do several different activities,one of which is running, another of which is playing badminton, another of which is reading book, the others of which is going to Temple everyday to pray.
4. I have had a few problems this semester, one of which is having 2 car accidents, another of which is thinking about leaving my aunt's apartment.
5. I like many types of food, most of which are Vietnamese food, another of which is Italian food, another of which is Thai food, the others of which is Chineses food.
6. I have 2 siblings, one of whom is married and had one girl, another of whom is still studying in University
1. and my favorite of whom is Barbara, who taught me in level 2.
Delete2. ...my best friend who comes from Iraq, and several of WHOM...
3. the last of which is going...
5. the last of which is Chinese food.
You wrote 6 sentences, all of which are good.
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC, one of whom speaks Turkey, one of whom her house flooded, none of whom from Brazil but all of whom very helpful and easy-going.
ReplyDelete2. I know many interesting people, many of whom thinks like me, but also many of whom have very different thoughts and backgrounds.
3. I love to do several different activities, one of which is dancing, two of which are sky diving and bungee jumping, but my favorite of which is sleeping. :)
4. I have had a few problems this semester, one of which was almost having lost my passport, another of which was breaking my both legs, and the worst of which was loosing my iPhone.
5. I like many types of food, most of which have a lot of carbohydrates on it, but some of which are pretty health.
6. I have a lof of friends but my worst friend is Joana, whose mouth is never able to keep any secret.
1. Try again (4 mistakes!)
Delete2. many of whom THINK
4. You broke your legs? WHAT?
You have written some good sentences here, all of which I enjoyed reading.
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC, all of whom are wonderful and beautiful women, none of whom is single, but only one of whom already has kids, and none of whom lets me know how old they are.
ReplyDelete2. I know many interesting people, one of whom is a ninja woman who scares of a cockroach but not a robber with gun, a bunch of whom are humorous and enjoy making fun of the others, but I know for sure none of whom voluntarily does their homework.
3. I love to do several different activities, a bunch of which are sports which aren’t related with water, one of which is reading detective stories, another of which is watching cartoon movies, but none of which is going to a party.
4. I have had a few problems this semester, the first of which is going to class 5 days a week, the second of which is doing homework every day including weekend, the third of which is laughing a lot during class because of my teacher whose teaching is very fun, etc… but the most serious of which is this semester is going to end within one week (:
5. I like many types of food, all of which are Vietnamese food, a lot of which are Asian food, but none of which names sushi, and none of which is the dishes that is cooked by my brother, who just knows how to boil the egg and burns everything else.
6. I have 6 siblings, two third of whom are female whose cooking isn’t bad but they are reluctant to do it, one third of whom are male whose cooking is really bad so that everyone is reluctant to let them do it.
2. a ninja woman [who is] scared of a cockroach
DeleteYou have written 6 wonderful sentences, most of which have made me laugh hysterically (2, 5, and 6) and one of which has made me sad because I will miss our class too!
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC, one of whom enjoys hiking, but she seldom does it after she has kids, one of whom comes from one of my facorite countries Turkey, another one of whom has already moved 4 times, the last one of whom likes to say," say YES, people" on class, which left a deeply interesting impression on us.
ReplyDelete2. I know many interesting people, some of whose hobbies are really hard for me to understand, but I think maybe this is one of the reasons why they are more interesting and attractive than normal people.
3. I love to do several defferent activitites, some of which can make me realxed such as listening to the music and reading historical novels, some of which can help me lose weight, however, I never succeed doing that more than continuous 3 days.
4. I have had a few problems in this semester, one of which is my bad schedule of working and studying, one of which is the misunderstanding, which makes me feel super upset in that period of time, and the last one is my absence. Although they have become the past eventually, I still feel sad because I have not tried my best to do those well.:(
5. I like many types of food, all of which can make me feel full and happy, even though some of which lets me gain weight such as cakes, fries, and milk tea, it still cannot stop me to love them.
6. I have only one younger brother, who shares my parents' love with me, which is supposed to be that I enjoy all of the love by alone! But I still love him.:)
1. another of whom, the last of whom
DeleteWho was your "Say Yes, People" teacher? I think I can guess...
You have written some nice sentences, one of which is really good (2), one of which is pretty good (3), one of which has an unclear final sentence (4), one of which has some errors (5), and one of which should be rewritten because its unclear (6).
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC, most of whom were experienced and knowledgable.
ReplyDelete2. I know many interesting people, some of whom are from my country, most of whom are from different countries, and all of whom are considered as my friends.
3. I love to do several different activities, some of which indoor activities and most of which are outdoor activities.
4. I have had a few problems this semester, one which was being in a wrong neighborhood in a wrong time.
5. I like many types of food, most of which are arabic dishes.
6. I have 4 siblings, all of him miss me because I am studying abroad away from them :(
You have written many sentences, some of which are correct (1, 2, and 5) and some of which have errors (3, 4, and 6).
DeleteFor #4, what happened?
1-I have had several teachers at the LCC, the majority of whom were skilful and respectful, but one of whom is completely different than all of whom; she is dedicated and so kind that the students love her so much.
ReplyDelete2- I know many interesting people, the majority of home are my classmates.
3-I love to do several activities, some of which are outdoor activities, and the rest of which are self-activities.
4-I have had a few problems this semester, one of which is a lack of sleeping.
5-I like many types of food, most of which are Indian cuisine because they consist of a lot of hot sauce.
6-I have 5 siblings, one of whom is an engineer, tow of whom are doctors, and the rest of whom are students.
1- I have had several teachers at LCC,one of whom was very sweet, another of whom very funny, but both of whom with outstanding quality.
ReplyDelete2-I know many interesting people, some of whom enjoy to travel to the beach,several of whom prefer camping, and a bunch of whom prefer to explore the urban life.
3-I love to do several different activities, one of which is to play volleyball, another of whom is to go to movies with friends, one of whom is to read interesting books, but none of whom involves swimming.
4- I have had a few problems this semester, one of which with averbial clauses, some of which with my research paper,fewer of which with the reading assignments, and none of which with listening tests.
5- I like many types of food, one of which is Angolan, another of which from Italy, several of which from Asia countries and few of which from America.
6-I have 7 siblings, one of whom is a girl, six of whom are boys, one of whom is sweet and quiet, five of whom very lively and fun,all of whom are very loved by me.
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC, one of whom requires me write several drafts of research paper, another of whom give me many homework everyday, but both of whom are nice.
ReplyDelete2. I know many interesting people, one of whom always has smart ideas in different situations, some of whom are funny, and the majority of whom are my good friends
3. I love to do several different activities, the best of which is playing soccer, another of which is watching movies with my friends, but none of which relates to study
4. I have had a few problems this semester, the first of which is that I entered the class in the middle of semester, the second of which is that teachers gave me a lot of homework, and the last of which is that I need to pass the final exams which is not familiar with me
5. I like many types of food, some of which are from my country, several of which are spicy, but the most favorite of which is Japanese food.
6. I have visited 8 countries, one of which is in America, two of which are in Asia, and the rest of which are in Europe.
1. I have had several teachers at the LCC, two of whom were so dedicated, two of whom whose class I enjoyed and I owed all what I have learned about advanced English. The last two of whom taught me everything I knew about writing.
ReplyDelete2. I know many interesting people, one of whom is an electrical engineers and so smart. Another of who is my best friend, the rest of who are good people in my life
3. I love to do several different activities, one of which is hanging out with my favorite’s fiends, second of which is going camping without kids of course, the last of which is visiting the most incredible natural places
4. I have had a few problems this semester, one of which was not finding enough time to study, second of which being busy with some new changes in my life, and the last of which is feeling unhappy that this semester will be my last English course that I can take in my life.
5. I like many types of food, one of which is the food which my mother cooks, another of which is Vietnam’s food, the other of which is Persian food
6. I have (9) siblings, all of whom are kind and good people, six of whom are older than me, three of whom are boys, six of whom are girls, three of them are younger than me, and two of whom are my best friends